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"title": "写作项目 - 2025年10月14日 19:11",
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"topic": "AI生成对学习的影响\n",
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"writing_content": "Generative AI, such as large language models, are becoming increasingly popular. They offers students a powerful tool for complete homework and generating ideas. However, its impact on learning ability are a subject of intense debate.\n\nOn one hand, it is argued that AI hinder the development of critical thinking. When a student rely on AI to write essays, they doesn't engage in the rigorous process of research and analysis their own. This lead to a superficial understanding and a failure to develop their own voice. Furthermore, the convenience of AI means that less effort are put into mastering fundamental skills, such as grammar and structuring arguments.",
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"title": "写作项目 - 2025年11月02日 16:35",
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"topic": "The Role of Failure in Personal Growth (2024 National)",
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