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"title": "写作项目 - 2025年10月14日 19:11",
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"topic": "AI生成对学习的影响\n",
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"article_type": "议论文",
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"subject": "英语",
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"brainstorm_content": "Date Page The Power of small Actions We often the impact underestimate of that of only believing grand small actions change However gestures create history have deeds that shows minor profound can simple A consequences",
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"writing_content": "Generative AI, such as large language models, are becoming increasingly popular. They offers students a powerful tool for complete homework and generating ideas. However, its impact on learning ability are a subject of intense debate.\n\nOn one hand, it is argued that AI hinder the development of critical thinking. When a student rely on AI to write essays, they doesn't engage in the rigorous process of research and analysis their own. This lead to a superficial understanding and a failure to develop their own voice. Furthermore, the convenience of AI means that less effort are put into mastering fundamental skills, such as grammar and structuring arguments.\nDate Page The Power of small Actions We often the impact underestimate of that of only believing grand small actions change However gestures creafe history have deeds that shows minor profound can simple A conse quences.",
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"title": "写作项目 - 2025年11月02日 16:35",
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"topic": "The Role of Failure in Personal Growth (2024 National)",
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